Friday, January 21, 2011

AIP*

An empty clay jug knows neither its inside nor its outside. A full jug knows less than one overflowing. Yes, the water forms; but first it informs.


*Aphorism-In-Progress

Thursday, January 13, 2011

POV

Project of the week is to process this material on POV, because an online discussion made such good points on omniscient POV; it's not just about head-hopping.

The hint I'm taking from it may solve my voice problem. The character I wish to follow just does not have the voice the story seems to require. I need a stance from which to speak, and that stance cannot be close 3rd. His thought processes need to be not simply reported but interpreted.